Factors that help me with my movie script

 Kia ora Bloggers. In Te Ngahere we have been doing movie making still and we have changed the ending of the script to a better ending. We’re almost up to filming. We are helping someone else's group first because they need a few more people in  their group. Please tell me what you think about our script now?

 The Monster Chase

Script:

Narrator: In 1992 there were three young men that were on a  mission to  protect the city because it was under attack by the Cannibal man. The man was Big and Strong, The man was a romanian myth so people  thought it wasn’t real, until he thought they were all eaten. The cannibal monster ate people over and over again. He didn’t stop until  every human in the world was terminated.

Notes: Three teenagers are sitting watching Dora the explorer  .  Close up

(Mum changes channel to the news)

Tyreece:  Oh Mum, my mates  are over we don’t wanna watch the news, it’s boring.close up

Mother: ahua my house, my rules, my TV.  Sit down and be quiet. Far shot

Tyreece:  Why can’t we watch Dora the explorer? Side view

Mother: Don’t talk back or you can go to your ROOM! Eye view

Logan: Tyreece shut up and listen when Mum tells you to do something!close up

Tyreece: Nah leave me alone I can do what I want. Face shot

Tyreece:  Mum, what's that on the news?close up

Mother:  I don’t know,  but I think they’re saying it’s a romanian monster or something. Side view

Background noise: Smashing windows, blowing out lights and doors being busted down.

Mother: What was that? Close up

(Noise outside: glass smashing, heavily breathing behind the front door and the lights were flickering).

Monster/ Wairua: (lights flicker on and off then add teleporting sound then cannibal man teleports into room and then everyone starts yelling) .

Mother: OH MY GOD RUN KIDS! Close up

Cannibal man: BOO ( You better  run).  (Smashing the cars outside More Noise outside: Big storm)

Tyreece: I don’t  know, but don’t look back! Far back shot 

Logan: AAAAAAHHHH. Close up 

Tyreece: I TOLD YOU NOT TO LOOK BACK!!! close

Tyreece: I’m going to kill you after this is finished.side shot 

Logan talking as they run: Ok you can kill after this but, we need to run! Close up

Tyreece: fine lets run.close

Logan: mum run before you get demolished.Far side shot

Mother: Don’t LOOK BACK! If you do, you will regret it,  trust me. Mother Crying. close up

Mother: Hey MONSTER FOLLOW ME, IF YOU CAN!!!. Side shot

Monster: come here you slow kids.close

Both of the kids : your slow you stupid monster. Side shot

Mother: HEY U DON’T CALL THEM SLOW. close up

MONSTER: Really you be quiet and come here. Far shot 

Monster: yeah thats right RUN before i kill you.close up 

The monster grabs the mother  and told  the kids to shut up.

Mother: don’t you dare say that to my kids you mean creature.Far shot 

Monster: you're more of a weird creature.Close up 

Mother:Your the weird creatureClose up

Logon: I will miss you forever, and I WON'T FORGET YOUside close up

Tyreece: Logon come on we need to run.Close up

Mother: Run Logon.Close up

Logon: No I Won’t leave you. Far shot 

Tyreece: come on Logon Hurry.far shot 

Logon: Fine hurry lets run to the field, coming?Close up

Tyreece: ye, ye of course  close up 

Logon: Ok come on you told me ta come, so what are you waiting for bro, Hurry. Far shot 

Tyreece: fine i’m coming. Close up

Mother,silently saying something: I will miss you as well my boys. close up

Monster: Well, there we go Two more ta go. Far shot 

Logon: heavily breathing as they run to the  field Side shot 

5 Minutes later!

 

Monster: Where are you KIDS HAHAHA .Close up 

Logon: Steps on a stick. Crack. Close up

Monster: Well Hello there. Far shot 

Tyreece: Run LOGAN! Close up

Logon: REEEEEEEEEE. Close up

Logon: lets split up! Side shot

Tyreece. Ok go go. run to the mountain. Close up

Logan: Ok, Hey monster follow me. Tyreece see you later.close up

Tyreece: Ok he's coming. Side shot

5 minutes later!

Monster: Hey come back! Back shot

Logan: NO WAY YOU COME HERE!Close up 

Monster: come here!Far shot 

Logan: Yeah that's right come on.close up

Monster: Hey where are you!side close up

Logan: Up here.close up

Monster: Huh.Close up

Logan hiding: Hey! are coming to get me or not. Close up

Monster: Don't think so fast little boy. Close up.

Logan: Ok. you thought Side shot

Monster: Nooo, WHY MEEE! STUPIED ROPE.Side shot close up.

Logan: HAHA You thought too fast.Close up

Tyreece: OH MY GOD! You did it.Side shot

Logan: Come let's go home!Close up

THE END!!!!

Making Films

In Te Ngahere we have been doing movie making  for the Manaiakalani  film festival. We have been working on movies for two weeks now  and we are currently rehearsing and finishing off our scripts. Some people are already filming but we aren’t yet, we are still rehearsing my film. Making the script was easy and so was rehearsing and reading the script  Have you ever made a movie before? Title: 

The Monster Chase

Script:

Narrator: In 1992 there were three young men that were on a  mission to  protect the city because it was under attack by the Cannibal man. The man was Big and Strong, The man was a romanian myth so people  thought it wasn’t real, until he thought they were all eaten. The cannibal monster ate people over and over again. He didn’t stop until  every human in the world was terminated.

Notes: Three teenagers are sitting watching Dora the explorer  .  Close up

(Mum changes channel to the news)

Tyreece:  Oh Mum, my mates  are over we don’t wanna watch the news, it’s boring.close up

Mother: ahua my house, my rules, my TV.  Sit down and be quiet. Far shot

Tyreece:  Why can’t we watch Dora the explorer? Side view

Mother: Don’t talk back or you can go to your ROOM! Eye view

Logan: Tyreece shut up and listen when Mum tells you to do something!close up

Tyreece: Nah leave me alone I can do what I want. Face shot

Tyreece:  Mum, what's that on the news?close up

Mother:  I don’t know,  but I think they’re saying it’s a romanian monster or something. Side view

Background noise: Smashing windows, blowing out lights and doors being busted down.

Mother: What was that? Close up

(Noise outside: glass smashing, heavily breathing behind the front door and the lights were flickering).

Monster/ Wairua: (lights flicker on and off then add teleporting sound then cannibal man teleports into room and then everyone starts yelling) .

Mother: OH MY GOD RUN KIDS! Close up

Cannibal man: BOO ( You better  run).  (Smashing the cars outside More Noise outside: Big storm)

Tyreece: I don’t  know, but don’t look back! Far back shot 

Logan: AAAAAAHHHH. Close up 

Tyreece: I TOLD YOU NOT TO LOOK BACK!!! close

Tyreece: I’m going to kill you after this is finished.side shot 

Logan talking as they run: Ok you can kill after this but, we need to run! Close up

Tyreece: fine lets run.close

Logan: mum run before you get demolished.Far side shot

Mother: Don’t LOOK BACK! If you do, you will regret it,  trust me. Mother Crying. close up

Mother: Hey MONSTER FOLLOW ME, IF YOU CAN!!!. Side shot

Monster: come here you slow kids.close

Both of the kids : your slow you stupid monster. Side shot

Mother: HEY U DON’T CALL THEM SLOW. close up

MONSTER: Really you be quiet and come here. Far shot 

Monster: yeah thats right RUN before i kill you.close up 

The monster grabs the mother  and told  the kids to shut up.

Mother: don’t you dare say that to my kids you mean creature.Far shot 

Monster: you're more of a weird creature.Close up 

Mother:Your the weird creatureClose up

Logon: I will miss you forever, and I WON'T FORGET YOUside close up

Tyreece: Logon come on we need to run.Close up

Mother: Run Logon.Close up

Logon: No I Won’t leave you. Far shot 

Tyreece: come on Logon Hurry.far shot 

Logon: Fine hurry lets run to the field, coming?Close up

Tyreece: ye, ye of course  close up 

Logon: Ok come on you told me ta come, so what are you waiting for bro, Hurry. Far shot 

Tyreece: fine i’m coming. Close up

Mother,silently saying something: I will miss you as well my boys. close up

Monster: Well, there we go Two more ta go. Far shot 

Logon: heavily breathing as they run to the  field Side shot 

5 Minutes later!

 

Monster: Where are you KIDS HAHAHA .Close up 

Logon: Steps on a stick. Crack. Close up

Monster: Well Hello there. Far shot 

Tyreece: Run LOGAN! Close up

Logon: REEEEEEEEEE. Close up

Logon: lets split up! Side shot

Tyreece. Ok go go. Close up

The monster gets tyreece.

Logon: NOOOOO! TYREECE.Close up

Monster sees Logon: now come HERE little boy. Side shot 1

Then their  never be seen again.

Mosaic art

 Kia ora Bloggers. In Te Ngahere, we have been doing Mosaic art for the past few weeks on our Chromebooks and I have really been enjoying it. You start by finding a picture and then you insert the picture onto a Google drawing. You need to select Polyline from the lines tool and then you arrange these inside your picture. I have been having alot of fun with car pictures. I am really glad that I learnt how to do this. Have you ever experimented with Polyline? 

Hopefully I Get A Fibreglass Cast!

Kia ora Bloggers. A few weeks ago  I went roller skating with my friends and broke my arm. This week I will probably be getting a new cast because my one is getting a little bit soft on the bottom. It is getting pretty loose too so this week I'm hoping for a fibreglass cast.  Hopefully this will not be as heavy as my current cast and I will also be able to play PlayStation because I am currently using my chin to control my character in Fortnite and using my hand that is not broken to shoot and control the camera angle.  Have you ever used your chin to play fortnite or any other game ?